Surprise Flowers by Linda

Surprise Flowers by Linda BY CHANCE  by Linda Sansalone # Holding the screen door propped open with her back, Alex reached into her money belt for her door key when a flash of colour and cellophane caught her eye.  She picked up the bouquet of flowers and unlocked her door.  Kicking off her running shoes,...

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Patrick
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17 days ago

Hi Linda,
There’s good description and detail in this piece. Not only the clothing and jewellery, but also tactile, which increases the romantic appeal. The dialogue is good, and natural. Also funny—the confusing series of phone calls where Alex doesn’t always know who she’s talking to.
Thanks for sharing.
Pat