This sounds like the kind of diary the detectives find after a series of brutal killings have taken place. A precursor of things to come. Very well constructed. Creepy in the right degree. Gives a character description in the first person. Good idea!
I liked that you wrote this from first person POV to get a feel of a character and his situation. Good insights and descriptions about his family. Some disturbing ideas and goals, but not every character is “nice”. It should make for an interesting story.
Hi Patrick,
Thanks for the feedback. I’ve slowed down on the WTCOI stuff. Not much going on past 8. If you are doing these, I will start back up again and provide feedback. (will also check to see if you’ve done others).
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This sounds like the kind of diary the detectives find after a series of brutal killings have taken place. A precursor of things to come. Very well constructed. Creepy in the right degree. Gives a character description in the first person. Good idea!
Hi Marilyn,
Yeah, it was a bit spooky poking around in this kid’s head. What the heck, it’s Halloween season. 🙂
Randy
Hi Randy,
I liked that you wrote this from first person POV to get a feel of a character and his situation. Good insights and descriptions about his family. Some disturbing ideas and goals, but not every character is “nice”. It should make for an interesting story.
Cheers,
Pat
Hi Patrick,
Thanks for the feedback. I’ve slowed down on the WTCOI stuff. Not much going on past 8. If you are doing these, I will start back up again and provide feedback. (will also check to see if you’ve done others).
Thanks
Randy