glad you spotted that reference.

hi Christa – that feedback is very helpful- thank you.

yes, it was ` part of the death process. I wonder how I could polish this piece to make it clearer?

good visuals again. did you enjoy our marathon?

Last line made me laugh.

with ms monroe in the dress?

a strong first paragraph…a great last line.

I like the rhythm in this piece.

haha -you are right!

love the reframing – its a dip, not a plunge. were you eavesdropping somewhere?

A lovely story. so gentle too.

thank you for the 2nd read. glad you found the ending elegant- I like that word. It has been fun doing 30 days of FF with you .

thank you for your comments- on this and on other pieces. Yes, you got the idea I was attempting to communicate. It’s been great sharing the FF journey with you.

thank you for reading it.

thanks for reading it twice. I think it should have been edited but hey ho!. It has been fun on this FF month with you.

yes, that’s what is happening. Thank you for reading it. I have enjoyed this FF adventure with you.

A fun read- glad it ended in success.

great dialogue. I like this meeting o f ‘minds’ too.

great story. I was impressed by him grabbing his book in an emergency. Colourful and energetic piece of writing.