That’s really beautiful Kim. I didn’t realise it was a tribute on my first reading, but can see how well crafted and caring this story is now. Gorgeous and touching work. Congratulations.

I’m so happy that you’re continuing with your serial system. Obviously I haven’t read the previous parts, but this really could stand on its own. It’s a great story with wonderful imagery and fully formed characters. Well done Jane.

What a lovely and sad tale Ruth, and told with such care. I love how you ‘answered’ each unsubstantiated claim. A beautifully told story; well done.

Thanks Juanita. Congrats on 30 days of fun. Now to continue.

Thanks very much Christa. It was great fun.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and comment Ruth. Sorry I’m behind in reading; catching up now. Thanks again.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and comment Kim. Really appreciate that. Sorry I’m behind in my own reading; catching up now.

Thanks Jane. Sorry I’ve been late reading stories; catching up now.

Wonderfully descriptive. I wish I could fill a dress like that! A great piece of writing, congratulations.

I agree with ChacoKid, great last line. Well done.

Oohh who doesn’t love a haunted castle story. Well done. Congratulations also on 30 days of writing.

Thanks very much for reading it Becky.

Hahah they sure do. Thanks for reading it.

Thanks. Congratulations to you too. 30 stories in 30 days is awesome – well done!

Thanks so much Jane. Looking forward to reading your work in the future. Congratulations.

Oh I love it. Well done Jane. I loved your whole series and am in awe of how you used the prompts. I’m going to miss this story. Thanks for all of your encouragement and feedback, and congratulations on 30 days of writing.

Great use of the prompt Jane. I was wondering what you were going to do with this one. I can’t wait to read the rest.

Thanks very much Christopher.