Sandy Menarek
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Self-doubt by Christian Donovan 6 days, 16 hours ago
Wouldn’t it be nice if we could see ourselves with the same eyes we did as a child, and realize our own value? Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, MUMS & AUTUMN TRANSITION by Wanda Lovan 6 days, 16 hours ago
Thank you for such a fun description of fall, my favorite time of the year. I like how you brought in all the senses into the poem. I could see the tree swaying in the breeze, while doing the striptease. Great job.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, What rhymes with rhyme? by Ismael Rodriguez 6 days, 16 hours ago
This was fun to read. I thought the rhythm of your poem added to its lightness. Thank you for sharing.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, From the Outside by Annette Deyro 1 week, 6 days ago
Just being there is so important. Your poem is so warm and caring. Thank you for sharing.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Relax by Halimah Aliyu 1 week, 6 days ago
I like your poem and needed to hear what it says. Thank you.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Writer's Block by Andie Patrick 1 week, 6 days ago
This was so much fun to read. We all need a muse like Thalia. Thank you for sharing.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, The Heavy Lightness of Truth by Meg Fargher 1 week, 6 days ago
I felt like I was standing next to your MC throughout the story. Thank you for a great read.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Grandpa Henry by Sandy Menarek 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Thank you.
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Sandy Menarek wrote a new post, Grandpa Henry by Sandy Menarek 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Grandpa Henry by Sandy Menarek
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I was four and saw my aunts crying in the drive
Grandpa Henry died that day
I did not understand why he went away
Time has passed but my memories keep him alive.
A master […]
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Sandy Menarek wrote a new post, Julia and Thelma go shopping by Sandy Menarek 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Julia and Thelma go shopping by Sandy Menarek
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It was one of those beautiful October days. The air was crisp, and the leaves were almost at their peak color. Two of the neighbor children were collecting some of […]
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This was enchanting! I loved their antics and I can’t wait to be that person with the ‘bumper’ electric cart! 😀
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, My Jason by Chantel Barton 1 month, 1 week ago
That was spooky. I liked the way you built the character of Sarah. This has the makings of a much longer story, or a series of stories. Thank you for a fun read.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Julia's Roses by Sandy Menarek 1 month, 1 week ago
When I first started writing this story, Mrs. Abbott was the jealous one, but when I finished I noticed a jealous streak in Thelma as well. That wasn’t intentional. It just happened. I am writing a series of stories about Thelma and Julia. Mrs. Abbott was introduced in my previous story, The Gardener. These women are so much fun to write…[Read more]
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Julia's Roses by Sandy Menarek 1 month, 1 week ago
Mrs. Abbott has been writing herself into the stories of Julia and Thelma. Thank you for your comments.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Julia's Roses by Sandy Menarek 1 month, 1 week ago
Thank you.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Assassin Troubles by India Rattler 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. There are hints at further problems for these two assassins: the lost shoe, overstaying in one place, is Sadie really an innocent? I love the way you have weaved it all together. Thank you for sharing.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Green-Eyed Devil by Athina Antoniou 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I felt bad for Yvette even though she was controlling and wanted everything her way. She must have felt inadequate to be that jealous. I liked how you ended the story leaving us to decide if she was going to kill everyone around her or kill herself or cut herself so everyone would feel sorry for her.
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Sandy Menarek commented on the post, The Pear Shaped Tone by Melissa Dill 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I liked your take on the fairy tale. I did get confused as to who was speaking here: “I cradled Una’s head in my lap. “I have been thinking about who you fancy,” William rapped on the top of the carriage.
Other than that spot, I thought you did a great job of the dialogue without using “he said, she said.” This was an enjoyable read. Thank…[Read more] -
Sandy Menarek commented on the post, Julia's Roses by Sandy Menarek 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you.
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Sandy Menarek wrote a new post, Julia's Roses by Sandy Menarek 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Julia’s Roses by Sandy Menarek
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Julia’s flower garden was like a Monet painting. She would often sit on her garden bench in the late afternoon taking in the fragrance of the lavender, the lilies, and the ro […]
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Very funny and charming story. I enjoyed the friends banter and the thought of the preacher reading their minds.
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Thank you.
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I enjoyed the story! Love how the dialogue told most the story. It was funny as well. I like how it didn’t end with them all being friends and such. Good story!
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Thank you.
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That was a great story, Sandy. I loved your description of the garden in the beginning and Julia’s attempt to ‘retaliate with kindness’ after hearing the sermon, only to have that kindness thrown back in her face. So true to life. The fact that Mrs. Abbott would go into Julia’s garden and pick the flowers without asking tells me a lot about her character. I could almost sympathise with her deceased husband after her prickly personality is revealed during her visit to Julia’s house. She could have done anything she wanted with her life after her husband died, but instead she chose to stay at home and exact revenge on a dead man’s ashes. Sad.
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Mrs. Abbott has been writing herself into the stories of Julia and Thelma. Thank you for your comments.
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Hi Sandy
I love the banter between the two friends in this story. It’s really what carried the story for me. The jealousy element seemed a bit unfocussed to me. I wasn’t really sure where you intended it to land. Was it Thelma, jealous of Mrs Abbott? Or was it Mrs Abbott jealous of Julia’s garden? Or both? That element just seemed a little bit scattered, and the clarity issue pushed it into the background a little. I enjoyed the story, and Julia’s attitude towards a bitter old woman. You contrasted her and Thelma so well. Overall, a very entertaining read. Good job.-
When I first started writing this story, Mrs. Abbott was the jealous one, but when I finished I noticed a jealous streak in Thelma as well. That wasn’t intentional. It just happened. I am writing a series of stories about Thelma and Julia. Mrs. Abbott was introduced in my previous story, The Gardener. These women are so much fun to write about. Thank you for your comments.
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A very touching memorial, Sandy. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you.
Hi Sandy, This is a touching poem in praise of your grandpa. He sounds both a very skilled man and a loving grandfather. Thank you for sharing your portrait of him.
What a fine Grandpa! Thanks for sharing the stories through your poetry.
Wanda