I think the reader has the flexibility to have a different meanings.

Hi Anntte, I am not sure what would be appropriate punctuation. Any suggestion?

Two lines in bedtime is sufficient to be creative and positive. Agree.

Nicely concluded. Yes two is less than one or even nothing in some instance.

Yes life is collection of pair of two either alternate or opposite. Good collections.

varieties of duality. Good collections.

second, hour, day month and years between two. nice poem

Nice poem

Thank you Ielfring for reading and good words. Regarding mouse that part of the poem looks a little odd. Any my meaning is to be able to show something in the house we need other people.

Thank you Christina.

Thank you Dianne

Thank you Shae

Thank you Maggie

Thank you, Jene. I talked you her about your comments.

Interesting

Short and sweet and catchy

Keep writing

If it is long in may not be endless. Any way it is good.