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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Need two by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 1 week ago
I think the reader has the flexibility to have a different meanings.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Need two by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 1 week ago
Hi Anntte, I am not sure what would be appropriate punctuation. Any suggestion?
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Two by William 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Two lines in bedtime is sufficient to be creative and positive. Agree.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, 2 & 1 by CReese 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Nicely concluded. Yes two is less than one or even nothing in some instance.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Pairing opposites by Halimah Aliyu 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Yes life is collection of pair of two either alternate or opposite. Good collections.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Duality by Ismael Rodriguez 1 month, 2 weeks ago
varieties of duality. Good collections.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Two by Annette Deyro 1 month, 2 weeks ago
second, hour, day month and years between two. nice poem
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Split by Maggie D 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Nice poem
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Need two by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Ielfring for reading and good words. Regarding mouse that part of the poem looks a little odd. Any my meaning is to be able to show something in the house we need other people.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Christina.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Dianne
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Shae
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Maggie
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you, Jene. I talked you her about your comments.
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Nam Raj Khatri wrote a new post, Need two by Nam Raj Khatri 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Need two by Nam Raj Khatri
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I am only one on the site,
we need to be two,
to be able to fight
I am free from fear,
we need to be two ,
to be able to share .
I am only one in the house,
we need to be two […]
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Nam Raj Khatri wrote a new post, My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri 2 months, 2 weeks ago
My Lovely Wife by Nam Raj Khatri
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My Lovely Wife:
Many were there, but
You only entered my heart.
Love
Occasion
Varieties
Everything
Lies with
You
Wonderful thing
In the world
For me until
End of […]
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A touching tribute to the love you hold for your wife:) I hope you have read this to her, I am sure she would appreciate it:) Well done.
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Thank you, Jene. I talked you her about your comments.
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Wonderful tribute; lucky couple!
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Thank you Maggie
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So creative and what a great tribute.
very well done.
I hope your wife gets to read this.Thanks for sharing
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Thank you Shae
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Very touching poem – lovely. 🙂
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Thank you Dianne
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Lovely words for your lovely wife. Lucky her.
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Thank you Christina.
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Pubb’s Halloween Magic by nsbnina 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Interesting
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Santa by Mia Botha 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Short and sweet and catchy
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Drawing Deep, © Maruschka Scott 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Keep writing
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Nam Raj Khatri commented on the post, Eternal by William 2 months, 2 weeks ago
If it is long in may not be endless. Any way it is good.
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Great idea, I was a bit confused by the mouse, but a wonderful read, and yes, we need two!
Thank you Ielfring for reading and good words. Regarding mouse that part of the poem looks a little odd. Any my meaning is to be able to show something in the house we need other people.
Ah I thought it might be a pet name for a child.
I think the reader has the flexibility to have a different meanings.
Your poem has a wonderful yearning quality as though the person who’s saying this is stretching towards something they really want. I found this a powerful poem – well done.
I meant to say I also really liked the image you chose to go with the poem. Did you draw it?
I like the repetition of the “I am” phrase and “we need to be two”. 🙂 The punctuation confused me a bit tho 😅
Hi Anntte, I am not sure what would be appropriate punctuation. Any suggestion?
I so agree that a human’s basic need is to be part of a twosome (or more!). Like others, I hiccupped at the mouse, but why not? Well done with your poem, which I enjoyed.