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Georgiana Nelsen wrote a new post, Plot exercise 30, love, OTTR by Georgiana 7 hours, 21 minutes ago
Scene: Astral has found his grandparents’ home and waited on the doorstep for then to come home. They’d understood that their daughter and Noah has given Astral up for adoption. Adoptions were closed, so even if […]
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Georgiana Nelsen wrote a new post, 29 plot Lists. Ottr by Georgiana 7 hours, 21 minutes ago
MC Astral: Changes
Starts at home in Advance –a young high schooler, prodigy, whose parents have left her home alone with no money, food, or power. Alone, but doing the right thing.
“Borrows” her dad’s watch […]-
This is a great list, it’ll help with your story. And it shows you clearly understand how you want the character to change/grow.
I need to go back and do this with my 52 scenes story. Congrats that you’ve already got it done for this one!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, A Geocache for the Crew by Sharon Hancock 10 hours, 36 minutes ago
Oh good luck on the knee! I’ve been putting it off for ten years, but the shots seem to help me. I have faith you’ll find time to write… just put the company to bed, and take your laptop on the plane!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, 29-Plotting by Becky Crookham 10 hours, 38 minutes ago
Oh geez.I could play Mary. I never get lost in the city, but put me in the woods and i’m hopeless. (I also can’t do time zones!) I’m glad to see the family searching out the cabin… it makes it feel less ominous. I had trouble getting rid of the sense that Freddy had been abducted by aliens, but your story is so much better! Hope to read more!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, The Great Forgetting by Mia Botha 10 hours, 43 minutes ago
“We light a candle to remember that we lost our own lore. That our own history was so important to us that we forgot it.”…Great line. I have enjoyed reading Reese and Daniel’s adventures. Will this be 52S/2023??
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, The Window by Marilyn Weisman 10 hours, 44 minutes ago
Ouch! that hug hurt!
This scene was good but the language was a little stilted… I thought you were making Adam very formal, but Cherie does it too… try adding contractions… makes for easier dialogue.
It’s been fun watching your mind work!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, The Window by Marilyn Weisman 10 hours, 48 minutes ago
Those are good questions Marilyn! Will this be your 52 scenes 2023??
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, Wastelanders, scene 38, by Deb S. 16 hours, 50 minutes ago
You really are a wild swearer! 🙂 it appears to me that since dinner could be roasted rat, giving “a rat’s ass”might be too valuable in this world. Here are some synonymous phrases…my favorites include the tinker’s the monkey and the flying fuck.:)https://www.powerthesaurus.org/give_a_tinker%27s_cuss/synonyms
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, The Frozen River: Scene 39 by Cobus Kruger 17 hours, 22 minutes ago
You covered a lot of ground here…from Nic realizing he’d probably never be able to save Jenny to comical capers of Grizzlies and Schoolgirl. I’m always left wondering about Kai’s allegiances, but I trust Nic. He’s not a murderer. This made me laugh “What the fuck? You were holding it the wrong way ‘round?””
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, Gilly Falls #39 by nsbnina 17 hours, 48 minutes ago
Excuse me while I go burn some journals…ahem. It fascinates me of the secrets people leave behind, especially those that can hurt loved ones. All in the name of being “known.” The wat this is written makes me don’t the “accidents!” What has Dorothea done??
this is another great, well paced scene. I’m already feeling grief that Gilly Falls w…[Read more]
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, A Geocache for the Crew by Sharon Hancock 18 hours, 2 minutes ago
Oh no! Lance just feels like bad news! The play was really fun and creative,but would really only work in a small town. I know you will give more of the town on rewrite…our high schools average 3000 students.
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, Wastelanders, scene 37, by Deb S. 18 hours, 18 minutes ago
Wouldn’t miss it! Thanks!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, plot ex. 27, defeat, Off to the Races by Georgiana 18 hours, 19 minutes ago
It’s close! It has been super hard to keep up this month! Thanks for reading!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, The Window by Marilyn Weisman 18 hours, 20 minutes ago
That’s why we are playing here…freedom to change our minds!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, Loose Ends by Georgiana Nelsen (39 Celebrate) 18 hours, 21 minutes ago
Have to keep you coming back! 🙂 thanks!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, Loose Ends by Georgiana Nelsen (39 Celebrate) 18 hours, 22 minutes ago
Hmm…the whole book is in first person, and this breaks the wall a bit, but seemed popular the last time I did it. Will consider…I don’t need it,but it’s in character for Leslie. Thanks!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, 28 plot, available, OTTR by Georgiana 18 hours, 23 minutes ago
Trouble seems to find her, I agree!
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Georgiana Nelsen commented on the post, 28 plot, available, OTTR by Georgiana 18 hours, 24 minutes ago
We are in the last quarter here….thanks for following her!
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Georgiana Nelsen wrote a new post, Loose Ends by Georgiana Nelsen (39 Celebrate) 1 day, 5 hours ago
At least we’d booked a hotel in Axminster before we both conked out. The Fairwater Head Hotel had a king room with a garden view and breakfast included and wasn’t far from a nice pub or the train station. We wer […]
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Oh nice cliffhanger. Here I was wondering about the should have checked their email… was that a forewarning and then getting all cozy when pow. Well done. Except now I have to wait a week 🙂
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Have to keep you coming back! 🙂 thanks!
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HI, Georgiana Really good scene. You give just enough info to keep the reader up to date without getting ‘wordy”. The way you describe the farm makes me want to visit. Saw a small typo in this phrase: the hearth burned down to embers as got warmer. our own. Good cliffhanger at the end. I hate to think somebody is agitating the herd. I liked this phrase: You don’t need the details on that. It was Joe’s birthday, after all!,, but it sounds like you switched to a narrator POV talking to the reader. Thanks, Sharon
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Hmm…the whole book is in first person, and this breaks the wall a bit, but seemed popular the last time I did it. Will consider…I don’t need it,but it’s in character for Leslie. Thanks!
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Georgiana Nelsen wrote a new post, 28 plot, available, OTTR by Georgiana 1 day, 7 hours ago
Astral woke the computer and was happy to see that like most people of his generation, Ned didn’t password protect it or otherwise make access more difficult. She opened the browser, then logged in with her own p […]
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This seems ominous. Unfortunately, my guess is that she won’t be so lucky: “She only had to avoid Noah long enough to collect from the race or leave defeated”
I’m also guessing this won’t really be her last bet–but I’m not sure where in your story this scene falls?
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We are in the last quarter here….thanks for following her!
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Good tension building scene. As Becky says, I don’t think she’ll avoid trouble. I think it might be on the menu for dinner.
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Trouble seems to find her, I agree!
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So glad Astral has found her grandparents. She is wanted and loved! I hope to read all the scenes in-between someday! Well done on the challenge, Georgiana. Enjoy your company.