I agree, James is a sound sleeper….but he’s also still recovering and hurricanes are already so loud, it would be tough to hear anything over the storm. Assuming he was able to fall asleep in the first place, he’s exhausted and might not notice a change in the noise level Maybe?
Thanks for sticking with me….it worries me when readers drop…[Read more]

Thanks for jumping back in Sharon! I know it’s really hard to keep up, especially when we are doing more than one challenge. I’ve neglected my 12SS folks this year, wish i were reading more 52S ppl, and have big time fomo re flash. But I did the dialogue challenge and the three were just too much.

Thanks for pointing out my rail…[Read more]

when this is over i’m going back to see how many ways you’ve wanted to kill Liam! Eleven scenes to go…. must make someone suffer….

Eleven!!

Hi Kim!
What a wonderfully fresh take on an old tale! Your facility with words makes this sing…like the “ prickle that centipeded over her scalp”.

I am a little cofused here…we’re there two babies when the son died? It feels like twins, but not sure I see how that works.
“her strident plum voice, that it was for the best, that nature had…[Read more]

Hurray! If this relo goes as planned, you must have something up your sleeve for 11 more scenes! Love that Shelly took Mr Lizard with her and that she and Pan will reconnect with new respect for each other.
Great scene, Sharon.

Peggy,
You covered so much ground here! I was worrying that they’d be watching the wrong ship but didn’t realize the meeting with Mao was at the same location. I find myself hoping they all get out alive. Very worried for them all right now!
G

Oh wow. I’m breathless here Elizabeth. First at JD’s anger, and then what it seems he’s discovered. The loose ends are approaching each other. Amazing writing…loved the sorting of the pixels!
G

All good clues, and where is Cody? And the cats? Assume Phoenix is the new “neighbor” and with Ray looking at the homeless camp, I think Susan is right to be worried! Great movement in this one, Marilyn. Will you finish in 52?
G

Hi Elaine…thanks for reading! as I told Kim, I really needed another paragraph for Devon, to show what she gave up, how her bitterness soured any relationship with Bobby’s mother… but then, i’d probably be writing another darn novel and I don’t have time for that!

Loved revisiting the 70s a bit though!
Hope your birthday was great! I’ll…[Read more]

Thanks Kim. I really needed another paragraph, to show the future Devon gave up, maybe some of her jaded bitterness, but…word counts!

Your support is one of the best things about 12SS!!
G

Thanks Cobus! Great to see you here!
G

so sorry Peggy….still several scenes to go….

ha…no dreams for Brianna!. Sorry to frustrate you!!
Thanks for reading!
G

Georgiana Nelsen
(comments are dropping in wherever they please tonight…sorry!)
Peggy!
I was so worried no one was going to read this week! I have been biting my nails because I’M NOT SURE WHAT HAPPENS!!!

will consider turning sweet Curtis into a ball biting monster though, but you KNOW Liam would have a buddy in animal c…[Read more]

Peggy!
I was so worried no one was going to read this week! I have been biting my nails because I’M NOT SURE WHAT HAPPENS!!!

will consider turning sweet Curtis into a ball biting monster though, but you KNOW Liam would have a buddy in animal control….

Sorry to leave you hanging. Sort of :
G

Now now. Curtis is a good dog! He’s not a biter. I don’t think. I haven’t finished this week’s scene yet! I agree they are in a bit of a pickle….

Thanks for reading Marilyn!!
G

Hey Peggy…
late with my replies… so hard to keep up right now… i worry that that’s going to get worse as the year winds down! Glad you are sticking with me!
G

My silly characters love to turn nouns into verbs….I don’t know if anyone else says it, but …itmis the south and grammar is often ser aside…

Thanks for all the notes! glad you are enjoying.
G