Two by Annette Deyro

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    1. Sandy Menarek

      I liked the way you built a relationship through time. The last two lines made me pause, seconds to change the world. Such a short time, but oh so true. Thank you for a lovely poem. I enjoyed it.

    2. Kim

      I like the way you use two as means of progression through time and relationship status – very original.

      Nicely done