The Lemming by Babette

The Lemming by Babette # “Good afternoon, miss. Who are you here to see?” The receptionist was new and welcomed her with a toothy smile. “Edward… uhm, Mr. Samuel, I mean. Fierce Technologies.” “That would be on the fifth floor.” “I know.” She accepted the guest badge and walked through the security check. No there...

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Kim
1 month ago

What a great thriller-wish there was more!
You totally pulled me in and I was quite frustrated coming to the end of this and nothing to look fwd to.

So she crossed,and then double -crossed her ex-boss/lover/agent?
Hope you continue this later.

I still dont get why you do not have a following -your writing is always good and intriguing- do you reciprocate reads?

Excellent piece

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1 month ago

This was quite captivating. You painted the picture of your MCs dilemma in such a subtle way that the ending was quite a surprise. Your descriptions were on point. It was suspenseful throughout. I was engaged and felt the tension of the interactions through to the climax.