Tempest by Amana

how fair is nature's regard for this one,
such one as the temper of a woman!

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4 months ago

Such a good analogy, temper and storm. I really enjoyed how you carried it through. Would you consider “I love THEE as thou art” to keep the language of the phrase consistent? Not necessary though, it’s lovely as is.

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4 months ago

You’ve packed a lot of emotion into this sonnet. The line: ‘Temper, like a herd of horses, she throws’ is very strong. Well done.

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4 months ago

A fabulous use of natural imagery here, and you’ve really managed to convey the strength of a woman. I love this.