It’s a chilling story and you’ve told it in a very dramatic way, going back and forth in time. It’s brilliantly done. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing,

Thank you so much for your kind words and thanks for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

I loved this story and I hope you get to go to Antarctica soon. It’s on my list, too. I thoroughly enjoyed this fascinating tale about fascinating people and places. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you!

Wow, it’s a very well-written mystery. Really builds up the anticipation and the ending left me wanting more. I’d definitely love to read more of this intriguing story, but even as it is, it’s a fulfilling read. I especially loved how well you captured Anya’s fear. That drew me in right from the start. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much. I was going for YA too. 🙂 I hope to expand this story if I get the chance. Thanks for the feedback.

Thank you! 🙂

I’m really enjoying this story. Every little detail is well thought out and the story is very engaging. I also love your characters. Can’t wait to read more of it. Thank you for sharing. 🙂

I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for the feedback. 🙂

It’s a beautiful story. There is so much emotion in such a short piece, love, happiness, and sadness all woven together. Thank you for sharing.

What a beautiful story! I absolutely loved it. It’s written in such a fun way and the ending is just perfect. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Truly a work of art.

Great story and very well-written. I loved the scary vibe of this story. The main character’s voice is great and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Ending is a little vague, but it works in this case. Thank you for sharing.

This is such a fun story, great premise, and very well executed. Love the dialogues. It sounds very natural and flows perfectly. Thank you for sharing and I think you have done a great job writing in all dialogues.

Thank you!

It’s an intriguing story. I find your character to be very relatable and can’t wait to read more about her and her experience with the ‘Blue Breakthrough’ treatment. It’s a very well-written story. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you! And it should be Seema, his daughter. Sorry about that, and nice catch. 🙂

Hi, it’s an emotional piece and loved both your main characters; Lisa and Tahir. I especially loved the conversation between them in the beginning. Their back story seems to be an interesting one. I haven’t read previous installment but I didn’t have any difficulty following the plot. I enjoyed reading it and would love to read more. 🙂 Thank you…[Read more]