Fizza Younis
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Photograph by Elizabeth Graham 21 hours, 35 minutes ago
Wow, it’s a very well-written mystery. Really builds up the anticipation and the ending left me wanting more. I’d definitely love to read more of this intriguing story, but even as it is, it’s a fulfilling read. I especially loved how well you captured Anya’s fear. That drew me in right from the start. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Key by Fizza Younis 21 hours, 45 minutes ago
Thank you so much. I was going for YA too. 🙂 I hope to expand this story if I get the chance. Thanks for the feedback.
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Fizza Younis wrote a new post, The Key by Fizza Younis 1 day, 1 hour ago
He stared at the beautiful pendant his grandmother left for him and tried to ignore the tears that were falling down his cheeks unbidden. She was his entire world and after her death, he truly felt alone. There […]
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Nostalgia by Fizza Younis 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you! 🙂
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Overdose by Amrita Sarkar 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m really enjoying this story. Every little detail is well thought out and the story is very engaging. I also love your characters. Can’t wait to read more of it. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Nostalgia by Fizza Younis 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for the feedback. 🙂
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Granma Lulu – Estelle Westley 2 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s a beautiful story. There is so much emotion in such a short piece, love, happiness, and sadness all woven together. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Alone by Ellen Eigner 2 months, 3 weeks ago
What a beautiful story! I absolutely loved it. It’s written in such a fun way and the ending is just perfect. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Truly a work of art.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Gelled in Suspicion by C Alexis 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Great story and very well-written. I loved the scary vibe of this story. The main character’s voice is great and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Ending is a little vague, but it works in this case. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis wrote a new post, Nostalgia by Fizza Younis 2 months, 3 weeks ago
“I don’t trust people easily, always keeping my guard up, but then he came along and bulldozed all of my carefully erected walls. I’m still not sure how it happened. All I can say is that he became the most impor […]
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Hi Fizza,
That was such a tragic story! But so engrossing. I was hooked from the first line. I wonder if this is a part of a larger story that you are writing? It felt like one. You captured the love in this lady’s heart in such a resplendent manner. Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing!-
I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for the feedback. 🙂
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You really drew me in. I did not expect the ending until this line – She had already said everything she needed to say to the world. I can’t imagine feeling that way. I expected hope. Well done.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Terrible Twos by Zainab M. M. 2 months, 3 weeks ago
This is such a fun story, great premise, and very well executed. Love the dialogues. It sounds very natural and flows perfectly. Thank you for sharing and I think you have done a great job writing in all dialogues.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Azure by Fizza Younis 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you!
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Blue Breakthrough by Renee Shurilla 3 months, 2 weeks ago
It’s an intriguing story. I find your character to be very relatable and can’t wait to read more about her and her experience with the ‘Blue Breakthrough’ treatment. It’s a very well-written story. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Azure by Fizza Younis 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you! And it should be Seema, his daughter. Sorry about that, and nice catch. 🙂
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Breaking Blue by Amrita Sarkar 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Hi, it’s an emotional piece and loved both your main characters; Lisa and Tahir. I especially loved the conversation between them in the beginning. Their back story seems to be an interesting one. I haven’t read previous installment but I didn’t have any difficulty following the plot. I enjoyed reading it and would love to read more. 🙂 Thank you…[Read more]
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Azure by Fizza Younis 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you! 🙂
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Fizza Younis wrote a new post, The Azure by Fizza Younis 3 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s strange how we cling to hope until the last moment. Why, though? I would never understand. It didn’t matter how much you loved someone or how important they were to you, eventually, you would lose them, any […]
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Hi Fizza,
Reading one of your stories after a long time. Your stories move me in ways I cannot express in words. This one was no different. I loved how you show a bitter ignorant man’s transformation. His struggle with not just those related to him, but with himself, with Death. A great story! Thank you for sharing!-
Thank you! 🙂
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Beautiful story. I love this depiction of a man’s last days. Character and atmosphere come out beautifully.
I have a question of who is “Sameen”? Is it his daughter? His wife?
Still a perfectly put together story.-
Thank you! And it should be Seema, his daughter. Sorry about that, and nice catch. 🙂
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A death out of the blue, what a great use of the prompt. First person narration done splendidly. Good job!
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Thank you!
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Monster in Our Closet by Fizza Younis 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you! 🙂
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Elf Born Magic by Renee Shurilla 4 months, 2 weeks ago
It’s an interesting, well-paced story. I enjoyed it and loved Sunny’s character. Talk about life changing revelations! 😉 His life will definitely get complicated and a lot more exciting too. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Monster in Our Closet by Fizza Younis 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you. I appreciate the feedback. 🙂
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This story is very captivating! It’s not my go to genre but it really held my interest. I’m curious of the MC’s age, I read it as him being a you g adult.
Thank you so much. I was going for YA too. 🙂 I hope to expand this story if I get the chance. Thanks for the feedback.