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Fizza Younis commented on the post, LOST IN THE TRANSLATION By Valerie Ciolek 4 months, 1 week ago
It’s a chilling story and you’ve told it in a very dramatic way, going back and forth in time. It’s brilliantly done. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing,
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Things That Make Little Sense by Fizza Younis 4 months, 1 week ago
Thank you so much for your kind words and thanks for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Things That Make Little Sense by Fizza Younis 4 months, 1 week ago
Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it. π
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Jewel of Antarctica by Sue MacDonald 6 months, 1 week ago
I loved this story and I hope you get to go to Antarctica soon. It’s on my list, too. I thoroughly enjoyed this fascinating tale about fascinating people and places. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Key by Fizza Younis 6 months, 1 week ago
Thank you!
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Photograph by Elizabeth Graham 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Wow, it’s a very well-written mystery. Really builds up the anticipation and the ending left me wanting more. I’d definitely love to read more of this intriguing story, but even as it is, it’s a fulfilling read. I especially loved how well you captured Anya’s fear. That drew me in right from the start. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Key by Fizza Younis 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you so much. I was going for YA too. π I hope to expand this story if I get the chance. Thanks for the feedback.
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Fizza Younis wrote a new post, The Key by Fizza Younis 6 months, 2 weeks ago
He stared at the beautiful pendant his grandmother left for him and tried to ignore the tears that were falling down his cheeks unbidden. She was his entire world and after her death, he truly felt alone. There […]
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Nostalgia by Fizza Younis 9 months, 1 week ago
Thank you! π
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Overdose by Amrita Sarkar 9 months, 1 week ago
I’m really enjoying this story. Every little detail is well thought out and the story is very engaging. I also love your characters. Can’t wait to read more of it. Thank you for sharing. π
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Nostalgia by Fizza Younis 9 months, 1 week ago
I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for the feedback. π
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Granma Lulu – Estelle Westley 9 months, 1 week ago
It’s a beautiful story. There is so much emotion in such a short piece, love, happiness, and sadness all woven together. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Alone by Ellen Eigner 9 months, 1 week ago
What a beautiful story! I absolutely loved it. It’s written in such a fun way and the ending is just perfect. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Truly a work of art.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Gelled in Suspicion by C Alexis 9 months, 1 week ago
Great story and very well-written. I loved the scary vibe of this story. The main character’s voice is great and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Ending is a little vague, but it works in this case. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis wrote a new post, Nostalgia by Fizza Younis 9 months, 1 week ago
βI donβt trust people easily, always keeping my guard up, but then he came along and bulldozed all of my carefully erected walls. Iβm still not sure how it happened. All I can say is that he became the most impor […]
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Hi Fizza,
That was such a tragic story! But so engrossing. I was hooked from the first line. I wonder if this is a part of a larger story that you are writing? It felt like one. You captured the love in this lady’s heart in such a resplendent manner. Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing!-
I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for the feedback. π
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You really drew me in. I did not expect the ending until this line – She had already said everything she needed to say to the world. I can’t imagine feeling that way. I expected hope. Well done.
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Thank you! π
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Terrible Twos by Zainab M. M. 9 months, 1 week ago
This is such a fun story, great premise, and very well executed. Love the dialogues. It sounds very natural and flows perfectly. Thank you for sharing and I think you have done a great job writing in all dialogues.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Azure by Fizza Younis 9 months, 1 week ago
Thank you!
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Blue Breakthrough (part 1) by Renee Shurilla 10 months ago
It’s an intriguing story. I find your character to be very relatable and can’t wait to read more about her and her experience with the ‘Blue Breakthrough’ treatment. It’s a very well-written story. Thank you for sharing.
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, The Azure by Fizza Younis 10 months ago
Thank you! And it should be Seema, his daughter. Sorry about that, and nice catch. π
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Fizza Younis commented on the post, Breaking Blue by Amrita Sarkar 10 months ago
Hi, it’s an emotional piece and loved both your main characters; Lisa and Tahir. I especially loved the conversation between them in the beginning. Their back story seems to be an interesting one. I haven’t read previous installment but I didn’t have any difficulty following the plot. I enjoyed reading it and would love to read more. π Thank you…[Read more]
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This story is very captivating! Itβs not my go to genre but it really held my interest. Iβm curious of the MCβs age, I read it as him being a you g adult.
Thank you so much. I was going for YA too. π I hope to expand this story if I get the chance. Thanks for the feedback.
A wonderful, mythical story which would not be out of place in ‘One Thousand and One Nights.’
Thank you!