Thank you! 🙂

I’m really enjoying this story. Every little detail is well thought out and the story is very engaging. I also love your characters. Can’t wait to read more of it. Thank you for sharing. 🙂

I’m glad to hear that. Thank you for the feedback. 🙂

It’s a beautiful story. There is so much emotion in such a short piece, love, happiness, and sadness all woven together. Thank you for sharing.

What a beautiful story! I absolutely loved it. It’s written in such a fun way and the ending is just perfect. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Truly a work of art.

Great story and very well-written. I loved the scary vibe of this story. The main character’s voice is great and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Ending is a little vague, but it works in this case. Thank you for sharing.

This is such a fun story, great premise, and very well executed. Love the dialogues. It sounds very natural and flows perfectly. Thank you for sharing and I think you have done a great job writing in all dialogues.

Thank you!

It’s an intriguing story. I find your character to be very relatable and can’t wait to read more about her and her experience with the ‘Blue Breakthrough’ treatment. It’s a very well-written story. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you! And it should be Seema, his daughter. Sorry about that, and nice catch. 🙂

Hi, it’s an emotional piece and loved both your main characters; Lisa and Tahir. I especially loved the conversation between them in the beginning. Their back story seems to be an interesting one. I haven’t read previous installment but I didn’t have any difficulty following the plot. I enjoyed reading it and would love to read more. 🙂 Thank you…[Read more]

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It’s an interesting, well-paced story. I enjoyed it and loved Sunny’s character. Talk about life changing revelations! 😉 His life will definitely get complicated and a lot more exciting too. Thank you for sharing.

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I’m assuming this is an ongoing story. Otherwise, the ending wasn’t quite satisfying. 😉 Apart from that, I enjoyed the story. It’s rough around the edges but nothing a round of editing can’t fix. Overall, it’s an intriguing piece which will keep readers second guessing everything and waiting for the big reveal. Those are always the best kind of…[Read more]

I loved it! It’s a very well-written piece. I’m not sure if I have read previous parts of this or not. It seems familiar but I can’t recall the story. (My memory sucks!) Anyway, this piece is beautifully written and flows perfectly. I absolutely loved your characters’ names. The air of uncertainty and impending war gives the story a nice touch.…[Read more]