Such an interesting artwork and poem. I like how you present scenarios for the readers to imagine but leave them to decide what they want it to be. Beautiful!

As Dianna asked, can you share a bit more about the painting?

Love the uneven verses and the emotions they carry. The contrast between the beginning and the ending says it all. Love it, Karin.

I like the mood and atmosphere of the poem. It has a philosophical quality to it. Beautiful!

Such a lovely poem, Christian. Loved how you gave voice to the model and made her so relatable to the readers. Read your comment and got to know that this is a revered painting in Wales. Thank you for sharing it with us.
I googled crachach to know what it was.

The first stanza set the stage, and the second took the poem to the next level. Spot on with the warning. If only people listened. A very poignant poem. Thank you for sharing.

The painting is so intriguing! Love your interpretation and presentation of the painting and the emotions it inspired. Thank you for sharing the link to the artist’s website.

Thank you so much, Karin. I’m happy you liked it. 🙂

Thank you so much, Christian. I’m happy that you liked it. 🙂

Thank you so much, Nissan, for your kind words. 🙂

Hello Jane,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I uploaded a painting by an aunt, but I can’t see it now. I’ll edit the post and try again. 🙂

Thank you so much, Renee. 😀

Thank you so much, Christian. So glad that you liked it. 😀

Thank you so much, HM. 😀

Love the imagery and tone of the poem. It has innocence, hope, magic, and loads of love. Beautiful!

Oh, dear! Such a heartbreaking Haiku.
I’m so sorry for your loss. Losing a partner after 41 years is so painful! My condolences to you and your family.

Oh, you’ve taken us into the ancient times with your steadily paced poem. The mixed feelings and the setting blend so well together. The verses flow, gentle and mellow, yet impactful. Beautiful.