Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to read.

Thanks Martin! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Thank you for taking the time to read it! I appreciate your thoughtful feedback.

Thank you for reading!

Thank you!

This really hit home for me, watching my grandparents go through this a couple of years ago. I think you captured those emotions well. Thank you for sharing this poem!

Thanks Juanita!

I like the idea of identity theft being a “shadow self,” being together and apart–a neat take on the prompt. Thank you for sharing!

Thanks Christian, for taking the time to read my poem.

Lots of fun examinations of duality here–what a great take on the prompt. Nicely done!

Thank you!

The emotion in this poem is so real, raw. I can really feel the distress in it. I especially liked the reference to Othello, and the twist at the end had my heart breaking for the speaker. Nicely done!

Thank you!

I love the contemplative tone of one hoping to become two. A universal concern! I loved your alliteration and consonance here: “The splashes and flashes./Cutting across the misery./Colours spattered carelessly.” Thank you for sharing!

Thank you Jane!

I really enjoyed the examination of two and one and how they can be seen as the same. I would recommend that you don’t need to italicize your numbers–your meaning would still be clear without that. I especially liked the opening lines: “If two was a mere number/even though prime and even,/It would only be one/out of an infinite.” Thank you for…[Read more]

Thank you for reading and your kind acknowledgement!

Thanks Seyi! I appreciate you taking the time to read this.

Oh–thanks for catching that! I appreciate the feedback.