😄 perfect!

Will do!🤗

and the hell-hounds of Hecates – what a wonderful source of inspiration….🧡

I can only add to the accolades you have already received – bravo!! 👏👏👏
this was my favourite from you this year ! – might be my favourite of the entire year still!
I can see you have put serious thought and work into this one – a touch of class and air of professionalism to it.
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This is deeply contemplative and thought -provoking.
I like how you seem to cover bother sides of the argument, like you are convincing yourself : if you feel this, then that but if you feel that, then this. and it really is all about perception at that one moment in time, isnt it?
great piece Jane 💖

lovely June
you create a sense of nostalgia and the repetition has the effect of being like a mantra : creating a wonderful zen-like nothing-less, leaving the mind free to focus only on the here and now. I found this very soothing.

very apt!
you and Hanri definitely captured my current mood.
but at least your life is returning to its more normal state 😉😊

I thought this was thought provoking – not just the need to collect ‘stuff’ but the need to be noticed! Ala FB posts of mindless shit that …really, people have the compulsion to (over)share?? draw attention to?
have we become a society of narcissists – gosh you’ve got me started now..I might use your poem as a launch-pad for something else now…[Read more]

A quirky love poem .
you evoke such a sense of longing , of missing the other – really well written!

I had to laugh :
Resolutions, fallen in the battle,
silently beg to be buried in honour, 😂😂

you could be describing me , every last inch of it! only 2 months to go…

this was brilliant – succinct and razor-sharp
and your pic is the perfect accompaniment 😁

I hope this is not the reason we haven’t seen you on 12SS!!
Most definitely a Poet AND a writer!
this cut to the quick , and is filled with quite a sense of despair .
got me in the feels , this.
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clever, clever,clever !! 😄👏👏👏

I feel tired just reading this!😅
some great observations of the humdrum that creeps into most of our daily lives.
the word ‘another’ kinda creates that effect, doesnt it?
great work – I enjoyed this!

loved the connections you made with each ‘another’, thought this was really clever

perhaps the only line that didnt work quite as well was : Another glance, more community. …hmmm trying to think what would fit with the pattern you’ve created in the rest of your poem…another glance, another affinity or another glance, more solidarity…[Read more]

Well if you write like this without much thought ? I can only imagine your 52S must he terrific! 👏👏👏

I must say binge reading this from part 1 is great, it makes it easier to remember who is who.
I’m not sure where you’ll take the plot from here, it really can go in any direction.
I think this will appeal to YA and adults alike.
Enjoyed reading it all …now only 2 scenes left…what can go wrong 😆
Great story Peggy -well done!

Cinematic scene -love it!
…next!

Great scene!…
…next!

This has the feel of a biblical Exodus….
next!…

Hi Peggy
I have so much to cstch up on,so I’m binge reading…will comment at your most recent one…
….loving your story 👍🏻