• Jodie Waller posted an update 5 months, 2 weeks ago

    Hi Martin,

    Thanks for your positive critiques as well. I’ve got to take a look at those adverbs & modifiers for future writing then 🙂 I get your point – less would make it a tighter story. I hear you on the ending part 😀 If I were a tad bit honest I’d admit that I had to idea what I was going to do with the ending until….well the ending. haha. Thanks for your honest review.