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  • Misunderstanding by Jeannie Mackenzie

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    It was quite possibly the best fish supper I have ever eaten.  I ate it sitting on the cold stone seawall in the sort of half-hearted rain shower that makes up for its […]

    • I very much enjoyed this. You gave us a very real depiction of two friends who are really no longer friends, but just people used to being together and resenting each other because of it. I liked the symbolism of the Viking funeral ship to sail their friendship and the accompanying toxic baggage away. Very good story.

    • You did an excellent job of showing emotions in a very physical way. For example, “I reached out my arms in a gesture of surrender and felt it flow out through my fingertips. “ Beautifully done.

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