Thank you
I think if I had brought just a thought from him it would have made more sense. 🌹

I had a real battle with that part and I know it needs working on.

1. Not sure if Raymond would agree to anything behind the garage.
2. Couldn’t expose Walter too much – he needs working on too.
3. Trying to think how o make Raymond desperate enough to agree on the spur of the moment without him losing too much of himself.

Thanks for that. Loads to work on…[Read more]

Hi Christian,
My husband is the artist. This one was named ‘Demure’ – I just love it.

I think sloths are intriguing and this was intriguing.
How interesting – I ask myself ‘What was hung?’
Loved it.

That was lovely.
Packaged in love and wrapped in love.
Well done.

Nothing wrong here.
Don McLean would applaud you.
Well done.

Beautiful – Well done.

Oh that was so much fun.
I’m so pleased I popped in here to read.
Loved it.

Thanks

I’ve also grown fond of Raymond. 🙂
Doc is near retirement but Syd and David are same age. They went to school together. They are early 40’s
Thanks

Thanks

Feisty Magali – I just adore her and I am very pleased with her meeting Ryan. There was something special between them from the word go.
Graham’s comment about needing a description of her has made me inquisitive now and I realize I don’t have a clear image of her yet. Does she toss her hair over her shoulder or does she just fluff it up after a…[Read more]

This was a great scene.
I’ve been waiting for the link back to the accident in the beginning.
Descriptions in the mine are very good and clear this time. I’m not sure if it was because it wasn’t so detailed this time or because in previous scenes when they were detailed in depth I reread them. Either way it worked – I am now familiar with the…[Read more]

I’m always torn between when it comes to Chavvas.
Sometimes I want to to punch him he’s such a heel and then this week I felt sad for him.
This back story was so well told seeing that there is not much dialogue.
Great – See you next week.

I couldn’t wait for this week to see what had happened to the old man.
Surprise – surprise.
Lord Sly is a very wily old man but I think he has to be with a family like that.
I’m also pleased he has such loyal friends and servants to look after him.
I’m warming to him. 🙂
Excellent scene.

Thanks for that.
I’m going to see what I can do with this at the end of the year.

That was a wonderful story, written with heart.
When my granddaughter arrived this morning, we read it together. She is so touched by it that she’s making plans to implement a week of kindness in her class. It seems the prize will be cupcakes for everyone.
Thanks for your story 🌹

I don’t really write fantasy but really enjoying it.
I am going to try and follow through with the Magic Stones in all the prompts this year.
Thanks for reading.