Laurie
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Laurie commented on the post, Snail's Pace by Sue 1 month, 1 week ago
Your story hooked me right away. The descriptions of the ice cream and animals was wonderful.
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Laurie commented on the post, Area 52 by Alice Elizabeth 2 months, 1 week ago
Awesome story. It would make an excellent novel.
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Laurie posted an update 2 months, 1 week ago
Hello I tried sending my story through notes and it didn’t work. I will try google doc. But who do I send the document too.
What is the name it goes to?
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Laurie and
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Laurie commented on the post, Writer's Block by Andie Patrick 3 months ago
Loved the story, I need to find my own muse so to speak,
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Laurie commented on the post, The Heavy Lightness of Truth by Meg Fargher 3 months ago
I loved your descriptions.
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Laurie's profile was updated 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Laurie commented on the post, A Close Knit Family by Laurie Brin 3 months, 2 weeks ago
How do I do the dividers. I really appreciate the feedback.
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Laurie commented on the post, Help, I've Lost my Bundt by Jessica Brimer 4 months, 1 week ago
This could be made into a series about cakes, bake sales . Relationships with parents, kids and teachers.
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Laurie commented on the post, When Life Gives You Lemons by Astrid Blume 4 months, 1 week ago
This pulled on my heartstrings it is vey poignant. Excellent writing.
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Laurie commented on the post, A Close Knit Family by Laurie Brin 4 months, 1 week ago
Thank you very much.
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Laurie wrote a new post, A Close Knit Family by Laurie Brin 4 months, 1 week ago
A Close Knit Family by Laurie Brin
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David is my husband ,my name is Rachelle. We’ve been married fifty five years.For past three months we were discussing selling our beautiful home, into an all inclusive seni […]-
Hi Laurie,
Lots going on here! I’m a sucker for a happy ending myself. All’s well that ends well!
Thanks for the amazing ride.
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Thank you very much.
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Hello. You got a lot going on. I liked this part best, ” I escaped six months ago and found out where you were! ” I like the emotions your character gave and it got interesting. Overall I liked it 🙂
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Hi Laurie, I love family dramas and you’ve concocted one with many layers, which kept me hooked. Having said that, I did have a bit of a hard time following the different scenes – perhaps you could consider using a divider and/or two paragraph spaces to make it flow better? Thank you for sharing this wonderful saga with us. ~ Astrid
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How do I do the dividers. I really appreciate the feedback.
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Laurie commented on the post, It's Never too Late for a Happy Childhood by Maria Delaney 4 months, 1 week ago
What a wonderful story. It kept me hooked. Wishing more.
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Laurie commented on the post, Working Dreams by Susan Evans 4 months, 1 week ago
This is a wonderful and poignant story. You are A beautiful writer.
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Laurie posted an update 4 months, 1 week ago
Positive I finished my story. So last night I just filled in the title of story brief teaser. So I went into it today and it didn’t save. Can you safe it before sending.?
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Laurie commented on the post, The Clue by Anusuya Kashi 5 months ago
I found the story very interesting. It flowed really well.
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Laurie commented on the post, The Haunting of Jonathan Haddock by Peggy Rockey 5 months, 1 week ago
This would be an excellent novel.
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