Thank you Sandy for the read and your comments. I’m so glad you liked it. 🙂

Thank you, Paul, for the read and your kind comments. I have a lot to learn, and relearn as the months go by. Thanks for the suggestions. 🙂

Hi Paul. I love the voice in this piece!

Thank you, Marcena, for the read and your kind comments. I’m so glad you liked it. This was definitely my way of giving encouragement to new poets. 🙂

LOL Yay! 😀

Hi Melanie. Great use of the prompt here. Well done, but I have a question? Is this right?

 Dan looked up and caught him staring, he smiled and waved. Beckoning Dan to come outside.

I though Dan was already outside. And it might help to have a comma between these sentences. 🙂

Thank you, Elaine, for your kind words. Most appreciated. I only hope 500 words will allow room for another stand alone part. 🙂

Thank you, Christian. I appreciate your feedback. Thanks for reading. 🙂

Glad you liked it, Kim. It’s sort of an inspirational push to get people to write more poetry. Mic drop. 😀 Like it.

Thank you, Mia. I do suffer from a lack of body language in my stories. That’s a great suggestion that I will definitely add from here on. 🙂

Excellent. Now I know where it started. 🙂

Anticipation! 😀

Ah Jane, I certainly did, my studious stude. 😀 This was definitely fun to write. I can’t wait to share the next poem. Finished it the day after the prompt. I know, I’m odd. 😀

Thrilling edition, HM. The character development is fascinating. Love it. 🙂

Draw that curtain back for an encore, Liz. That was well done. 🙂

Wow, CRease, this was rhyming on steroids. 🙂 Loved it. One thing, though. Shouldn’t that be, ‘a rhyming sage on a stage’?

Very sneaky poem, Marcena. Making all those rhyming crimes and getting away free. 😀 Thanks for sharing.

Oh, I see what you did there. Very nice, scribe Cinthia. 🙂

Reminds me of a Rap song. Nicely done. 🙂

Thank you, Christy. It was fun to write but I have no idea if it follows any particular poetry scheme. It just felt right. 🙂