This is a lovely piece of someone missing someone. I enjoyed it very much.

I like the images you have painted in the poem, even though the atmosphere is rather depressing and wintry. Thank you for sharing your poem.

Lovely use of rhyme, and the message resonated. Thank you!

Hi Anjum
This is a very different and magical tale. Took me a while to realise that they were all colours helping a lady write a movie/story. Very fanciful indeed:)
I hope they are all successful.
There are quite a few instances with no space after your full stops you may want to edit. Two other very small things I came accross:

 All pencil applauded.  – All the pencils applauded

Blackolor was not an optimistic though he was an avid reader – was not an optimist

A fun read, thank you for sharing:)

This was an interesting take on the prompt. I was a little lost right at the start, but eventually figured it out and got into it. The dialogue reads and flows well – almost like something more classic. I would have like to see more setting for the dialogue bits, or more framing. But this isn’t really a serious problem because a lot of that is taken care of in the dialogue itself. Unique bit of writing. 😉

Quite a different approach and story all together. I found it a bit hard to jump right in to the story as I was grasping at straws to find my bearings. It quickly showed me where we were heading and the thoughts running through your mind. Nice story!