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  • Hey girlfriend,
    You made my heart ache with this one. Knowing and loving your style of writing, I sort of had an idea how it would end, but I still couldn’t stop myself from hoping it would work in the end. πŸ™
    The graceful way the story flowed, the way you had me hanging on to each word is nothing short of what I expected. Loved it despite the…[Read more]

  • Hi Eva-Maria,
    Oh the descriptions in this one is so vivid. A very well-written piece in my book. The realism you captured with your writing is uncanny.
    Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Kim,
    Oh this was such a refreshing read. I enjoyed the fantastical elements you put into this piece. As always you’re absolutely brilliant. It’s good to see you writing again. <3
    Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Sue,
    This was a fun read. I might’ve baked banana bread hours before reading this. πŸ˜€
    I enjoyed the humor in this piece.
    Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Seyi!
    Oh it feels so good to read you after what feels like ages. Typically, I leave your and Charles’ stories to read after reading the others … as a dessert. πŸ˜‰
    But I am so glad I didn’t resist the pull this time. This was just epic. The vivid descriptions of the situations … the underlying humor … the serious issues like drug abuse…[Read more]

  • She watches him struggle to come to terms with her confession.A part of her wants to chicken out and take back everything she’s said, but another partβ€”the part that cares about what he thinks of herβ€”tells her t […]

    • Hi Anne,
      Gosh, this was certainly fast! A lot of things coming together and tension throughout the whole piece. Clever you. Thanks for a great read.

    • Oh Sam, better late than never, though it is for your own agenda. This is fantastic as always. Can’t wait for the next one. Keep it up.

    • Hi Anne- you are clearly the mistress of the last minute masterpiece! This continues seamlessly from the KWC, tone, language – it is truly like a tv/movie script. Super well done. I’m sorry that red lipstick is only 300 words…

    • Hey Anne, I’ve been waiting on the reveal about Vincent’s dad. You didn’t disappoint. Vice President Grant? Eish. I like the way you hade Andrea’s reveal solidify them all as a team and am glad that Sam is being useful though I fear for his longevity now. The varying points of view help to round out the tale, by bringing pretty much all your characters into view for a bit, at least. Nice job with that. Well done all round and all the best. Seyi

    • Hi Anne, oh this was fantastic. I loved reading it and all the little pieces starting to slot into place. I am so glad that Miller has called Vincent. I really want to see the horrid Elena bought to her knees. I hope you continue this to the conclusion:) Congratulations on following on so seamlessly from all the KWC prompts.
      I came across a few little things that may require editing:
      His face reddens at her words and he holds a hands out as if to touch her before stopping in mid-air.- and he holds a hand out
      β€œYou’re the only one aside from my mom, Sands and I to know about this.” – I feel another comma might be required after Sands and I,
      β€œThen why do you need vacation?” – Then why do you need a vacation? or Then why do you need vacation time?

    • noooooo – I hate it when I read, what looks like to be close to the finale and I’ve missed so many installments in between!!!! do I need to go track them all down in KWC???
      ARGGHHH – wish I hadn’t read this first- its like going to read the books ending before starting the book – I used to be guilty of that before my friends threatened to disown me
      I will just say – a cracker of a series! if you dont turn this into a book proper-like I’ll never talk to you again. too good not to be in print!

    • I agree 100% with Kim!! Too good not to be in print!! This is so much like a movie, Anne! :* Loved the whole thing. I love the love brewing between the two of them <3 Though I'm slightly heartbroken but still happy for my Vince πŸ˜€

      I do fear for Sam's longevity though. I wonder if Elena would find out before he rats out. This is getting better and better!! πŸ™‚

      • Hey Joyce
        Do ya think Anne will let us beta read her book ? What are our chances of getting THE first COMPLETE read before she becomes famous and forgots who we are 😂??

  • Oh Charles,
    You broke my heart with this one after all the laughter. Poor Bob … poor missus … poor Anne who loved them both dearly. :'(
    Thanks for sharing.

  • Hi Maria,
    This just keeps getting better. I agree with Deryn. I think with the larger word count, 12SS might be helpful in giving this story the ending it deserves. I look forward to read more from you no matter what you decide to do. πŸ™‚
    Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Anne commented on the post, Hex by Seyi 1 month, 1 week ago

    Hi Seyi,
    Now that’s a clever way to make the tables turn. I loved the humor as always. I’m going to miss getting my daily dose of laughter and smiles from you and Charles. πŸ™
    Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Title: Revelations (Reprobate – Part 56)

    β€œElena,” he says, sitting down across from her. β€œPlease don’t blame yourself. Bright was a monster.”

    Her eyes slowly travel up to his face, and for the first time, the […]

    • Urh what? Sands was… hang on! I’m a tad confused – I thought she was Sands, does she mean Bright… or is that his real name?
      My goodness Anne! This is a stunning ending. The interaction of all the characters is brilliant! Is she trying to plant the blame on Sam then? Glad he’s realising the monster she is!
      Can’t wait to read the end of this story in short story form! xx

    • Hi Anne,
      What a nail-biting finish to the challenge! And yet it goes on. You surely know how to keep someone hanging:-) Thanks for a compelling read. Will look out for you in the SS Challenge x

    • Oh, wow! That’s an interesting twist. I do hope that you are able to continue sharing this story with us. Great writing and thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

    • Hi Anne – what a chilling exchange between Elena and Sam and as for the bombshell…this has been my standout series on this site for both the plot and the excellent writing…so see you over on 12SS for the continuation!! ‘It didn’t work’ should work perfectly?!! Take care and keep those characters warm!!

    • Oh wow, think Sam has found out way too late. And that is a revelation from Andrea. I am glad you said you will finish this in 12SS – I have really enjoyed your writing:) Thanks for sharing Anne:)

    • Okay, so you know I didn’t manage to follow your story throughout, but I truly admire your being able to carry your story through all these prompts, and you always had a ton of comments so clearly you swept up followers. Glad you’re determined to finish!!

    • This was so gooood!! Sam has finally become Sam”wise” πŸ˜€

      I had suspected it! *does a small little dance* I thought she was his daughter but I thought maybe she was his illegitimate daughter or something. This is soooo good. Looking forward to the June installment!! πŸ™‚

    • Woah. what a star wars moment here. and darn it sam you suck. lol. I cant wait to see the rest in the SS.

    • Hey Anne, not too surprised at Sam getting it in the neck from Elena but the Andrea reveal was epic. No more words. Really well done. (ok, just a few) I’ve really enjoyed this saga and am looking forward to the next chapters, wherever you sprinkle them. Thanks as well for your always cheerful posts in spite of a tough workload. All the best and regards, Seyi

  • Hi Deryn,
    Oh this was such a clever way to use the prompt while keeping all fantastical creatures (especially those pesky elves πŸ˜› ) away. It felt like a trip down memory lane. I can’t believe we’ve actually written daily for 70 days! Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Dionne,
    Oh this was such an unexpected twist, but also so … “You!” Another creep-tastic story under your belt, my friend. Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Chloe,
    OMG! Girl, you’re on fire! I have goosebumps from reading this one. I loved being a part of Leah’s journey. I can’t believe there’s just one more chapter left! You’re ending with a bang … literally!
    Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

  • Ooohhh I loved this one. This holds all the promise of being an enticing tale of magic just like the Pumpkin’s story (Lol. Still refuse to call her Frida πŸ˜› )
    Kudos to you for trying different genres and excelling at them. Thanks for sharing. :*

    P.S. Thank you for keeping the skin on his face. πŸ˜›

  • Hi Seyi,
    Oh the shock might come sooner than you expect. πŸ˜€ I hope I managed to “glue” it all together in some way with the last one for now. πŸ˜€
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Maria,
    Thank you so much for your kind words. I can’t express how much I appreciate all the encouragement. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. πŸ™‚

  • Hehehe. I can see your sarcasm puncturing a hole through her devious brain. πŸ˜›
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Deryn,
    Aww … thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Nina,
    Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. πŸ™‚

  • Hi Jane,
    Is it horrible of me that I was beyond happy to see you all worked up by my creation of her character? πŸ˜€
    I just submitted my 70th flash fic for the KWC. This story, however, needs a few more chapters to come to the climax. So maybe I’ll see you in the June SS? πŸ˜€
    I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. πŸ™‚

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