These are huge goals – but good for you! I’m envious of your energy. Looking forward to rest of exercises …

My kind of writing Marilyn – to the point. Loved your goals and gonna adopt it too.

🙂 what marilyn said

Hi Paul – I love your SMART! That sums up everything any writer should aspire to. Well said. Would you mind if it goes on my motivation board?

So happy to see familiar special names in this group – it’s alway a motivator.
I love your take on it Peggy x

What Sudha said!

This gave me goosebumps. A story well told, well paced and well ended.
I particularly liked this: I took a breath and tiptoed into a chapter of his life 

Delightful story (and turn of events) … almost poetic. The repetition worked well. And at one point I was expecting Cassie to turn evil… but so glad it was just the opposite.

I went back to Red Haze and recognised the story immediately – commented way back then. But now the catch is the almost relevance (covid quarintines etc.)
As always, I enjoy your style – it keeps one wanting more … reminds me of Margaret Atwood’s MaddAddam trilogy.
One little typo – although it never deterred from the story:Should read THEY?…[Read more]

Your comment left me breathless- and ready for the next prompt! Thank you for this lovely comment, and for missing me 😉

Thank you Ellen – isn’t that life’s lesson? To make memories for one day…?

Thank you Nicole – good idea, the asterisk. And thank you for enjoying the ‘what-ifs’ 😉

Ouch!
For a moment I thought Lori might have been the cause of disputes… but obviously Mark was just another very sick individual
Hard to absorb realities so cruel – but well written.

I loved the ordinariness of appliances and there huffs and puffs – an all too familiar thing during lockdown. You captured it to the T. And then the change in tune – kept me riveted. A story well told.

Sue – thank you!