Lily in Espana, Exercise 3 by Laura Handrick

When the youth hostel is full, college student Lily is forced to find a place to stay, in Barcelona, where men notice she's young, traveling alone.

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Patrick
2 days ago

Hi Laura,
I liked the detail and description in this exercise. You certainly get inside Lily’s head and portray the excitement, paranoia and exhaustion that travelling brings. One detail I found a bit unrealistic, though, was Lily’s ability to see an eyeball through a keyhole from her position on the bed across the room.
Thanks for sharing this.
Pat