Comments

1. 

   Christian Donovan

   Not at all wordy as you warned! I like the punchiness of your poem. Well done with it.

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      Ismael Post author

      Thanks Christian. That was meant to be a joke. 😀

2. 

   Dianne Williams

   I loved your warning. I’m still laughing. 😀 And the poem is like slaps or punches hitting the ears – one two, one two.

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you, Dianne! Glad you laughed at that. 🙂 When I read it back to myself I can’t help reading faster and faster to get to the end! 😀

3. 

   Kim

   Love your ‘warning’ 🤣
   Succinct and yet I got that push and pull you set out to project.

   Your last line also wraps it up in a pretty bow with a clear message – well done!

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you, Kim! Glad you caught that. 🙂 And glad you liked my little poem. <3

4. 

   C Alexis

   Hi
   Such a spare poem, succinct yet inviting reflection.

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you so much! I appreciate that. 🙂

5. 

   Nam Raj Khatri

   varieties of duality. Good collections.

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you for reading, and your inspiring comments. 🙂

6. 

   Deryn

   Hi Ismael – so simple and yet so powerful. Well done. Hope you are all well. D

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you, Deryn! So glad you liked it. Doing great this season. Merry Christmas!

7. 

   EDamonMitchell

   Great take on the prompt. I love it.

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you! Glad you loved it. 🙂 <3

8. 

   lelfring

   Love the two sides! Simple, yet oh so complex. Thanks

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you so much! I appreciate that. 🙂

9. 

   Nissan Abadi

   Very nice. I like it.

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      Ismael Post author

      Thank you. Very glad you liked it. 🙂

10. 

    Halimah Aliyu

    Love this.
    Beautiful.

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       Ismael Post author

       Thank you very much. 🙂