Dark Elements, scene 21, by Deb S.

Lovely Readers, I am trying to take a new (for me) “less is more” approach to descriptions, especially of emotional baggage. Rowan is going through a lot in this scene. How is the balance of descriptions of his body language vs emotions, thoughts, etc? Too much showing, too much telling, or too little? I appreciate...

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