CRHYME by Jesmond Sharples

Don't take life too seriously!

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Christian Donovan
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1 month ago

Hi Jesmond, I think the crux of your poem is in your first line: I love words that chime and rhyme. Not all poetry has to be about end-rhymes – it can also be about chiming. Thank you for a perceptive poem dead on the prompt.

Stevie
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1 month ago

I love that word Crhyme lol. Very well done! And an awesome ode to rhyme (I only rhyme when I have to, like with a prompt lol). Enjoyed your take and how the rhyming words you chose. Sometimes they don’t quite work but yours do.

Stevie
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1 month ago
Reply to  jeszmond

You said it! LOL

Nissan Abadi
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1 month ago

Hi Jesmond
This is the first poem I’ve read that paises rhyme. Most others contempt it.
True, reasonable rhyming is a tough job, but it can also be exhilarating. I liked the line “My thoughts I write, wash my grime”.
Thank you for sharing.

Becky
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1 month ago

Light and fun! The second line makes for a tongue twister when read out loud. -Becky

NetaQ
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1 month ago

A tongue twisting fun rhyme time. I love your play on words with the prompt.

MKpoet
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1 month ago

Love it. That is a fun poem.