Submit Your Ninth Short Story For 2020 Today

It’s time to post short story number nine in the 12 Short Stories Writing Challenge. We’re learning so much in the writing community b giving and receiving quality feedback. Remember to post one story on and comment on four stories.

I will accept and approve posts for Jealous of… (Word count: 1250 words) from 9 September 2020, 8:00 (Johannesburg time | GMT +2:00), until 10 September 2020, 8:00 (Johannesburg time | GMT +2:00) on Please ask Google to figure out what time that will be in your part of the world.

Please submit your story on

  • Log in.
  • Submit (Top right).
  • Complete the form.
  • Select the correct category: Prompt 9: Jealous of…
  • Do not select any other category.
  • Your story must be 1250 words. I won’t approve stories under 1200 or over 1300 words.
  • Submit for approval.
  • Read and comment on four other stories. Please spread the love. Look for stories that haven’t been read, instead of everyone reading and commenting on the same stories. If you want tips on how to comment, read this post: The Complete Guide To Evaluating Your Short Story.


  1. This is an exercise in discipline. The comments are a bonus. There is no prize because I want you to focus on writing for yourself and to try and take more risks.
  2. Be kind when you comment. Start with a positive comment, suggest an improvement, and end with something positive. We are here to learn.
  3. Our next prompt is at the end of this post.

A few more points:

  1. I will try to read as many posts as possible, but I do have a day job that I would like to keep.
  2. NO hate speech. None. If you see something nasty that I should be made aware of, please send me a message.
  3. Be careful of profanity.
  4. I need to approve every post. Please be patient with me. I am teaching during the day and I will approve them as quickly as I can. They will all go up.

Can I still join?

You can join the 12 Short Story Challenge in any month. So, if you start in September, that will be month one for you and then August 2021 will be month 12. Sign up on

And here is Prompt 10: