Back and Forth by Christy Kunin

My heart swings on a pendulum of painTo and fro; back then forth and back again One moment it beats up from some small thingThen it’s down, a hopeless fog swirling High as hope beckons me open my heartThen low as your black mood threatens to start I’d like to say you do not know...

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1 month ago

Hi Christy, The rhythm of the whole of your poem is like a clock ticking, which you flag up from your first verse. It’s sad, yes, but there is still a ray of hope …

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1 month ago

Hi Christy, well done. A lovely poem. Great word choice, short and succinct.
Thanks for sharing.

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1 month ago

Beautiful and sad poem Christy. The words flow well and the rhythm and rhyme are easy.

The piece stirs a sadness of wishing it was better.

Well done and thanks for sharing.

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1 month ago

Hi Christy. Wonderful poem. Brings to mind a toxic relationship I once had. Thanks for sharing.

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1 month ago

Good, Pain rhymes like this

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1 month ago

Hi Christy
Nice job of rhyming. As I read this I wished it would continue with its realism, sensitivity and love seeking.
Thank you for sharing.

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1 month ago

Wow….I think I could have written this…it sounds so familiar right now.